Yo guys, what do y'all think of this so far? This is my first time drawing line-art digitally cuz I'm using a mouse. (Anything that you see that doesn't make sense, just tell me about it)
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The pose, anatomy, and perspective are a bit off.
The sofa in relation to the pose is applied unrealistically and doesn't give the illusion that she's sitting. Her legs look like they're trying to lie down, but the rest of her body tries to anchor itself to the sofa, leaving her spine straight like a "/" instead of a "C" shape. Did you use any references? I think the sofa is poorly done, especially because I feel like it should grow gradually to match her left arm. Her shoulders are fine, but they would be better if the path between her shoulders and neck were lower. Her forearm, where you tried to apply perspective, seems incongruously long to me, and her pinky on her left wrist should be smaller and placed lower (in this case, higher, since the hand points down). Her waist is unusually large. I see that you were going to make her pelvis, but I think the way things were going, it would be better if it wasn't visible, since the pelvis is lower (or well, I suppose that's her pelvis). I think I can see more details, but I'm getting carried away. Sorry if the way I explain the points to be fixed seems incoherent. Good luck.
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Wonderfully said. I can see you have great points about the sofa, I winged it first so I can focus on the girl. I'll redraw it after I finish the linework for the girl.
As for the anatomy, I actually used a referenced pose so the anatomy/perspective should be fine since it's based on a 3D reference already (Even her waist is to scale lol), but I do see your point, the sofa would help elevate the feeling of perspective.
Now that I look at it, you're right. Her pinky does seem quite large here. I'll fix that as well.
Lastly I'm not too sure about the shoulder comment you gave since this is based on a 3D posing reference, so this is just how the shoulder is lol.
Thank you for such a detailed response 😊